【The Summer Vacation of Traveling】
In terms of the memorable traveling in the summer vacation, the Hokkaido journey with my parents in my birthday was flashing through my mind.
Between my parents who is often busy dealing with business overseas with them rarely spending time with me, and having a great time which we've been there before, the reasons I chose Hokkaido was simple in my birthday. It was a trip to Hokkaido was totally worth it that not merely spent we the day together each other to strengthen family relationships, but likewise we went skiing and went to a hot spring with us enjoying.
On the whole, it was the unforgettable traveling in last summer vacation, which I really cherished the day leaving precious memory.
【暑期之旅】
当一提到在暑假时难忘的旅行，我生日那天和家人的北海道之旅便掠过我心头。
我会选择在生日时去北海道的原因很简单，一来是我的父母长期在国外工作很少有时间陪我
二来是我们曾经去过那里并有著美好的时光。就是那北海道之旅才非常值得，我们
不仅能在一起彼此相处度过一天，增强家人的关系，还能享受著去滑雪和泡温泉。
总而言之，我非常珍惜那天留下美好的回忆，在去年暑假难以忘怀的旅程。
【备注】粗体字是高级文法修饰，以及高级词汇和句型。
另外超过80个字没办法，因为这是高考等级的英文作文。